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Haiku - Moth

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In web of spider
Dancing for very last time
Moth dies unnoticed
Entry for :iconpenpa:´s connest [link], prompt: trapped

I´ve never wrote haiku before, so it was quite interesting:) As English isn´t my native language I used syllabes counter, so number of syllabes should be right.
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meszarosnadia's avatar
Haha ! I had a good laugh on this one. It may be even more thoughtful: it could speak about world's injustices, like poor people, stuck in the web of money, power, politics... I don't know if it was your intention but we can see something of it in this Haiku.